Thursday, May 6, 2010

Should children be raised to co-operate or to compete?

There are two ways that parents can use to raise their children so they become successful in their lives and get good place in the community. The first way is co-operation while the second is competition. In my opinion raising co-operation is better but competition is also important.

First of all, I will talk about co-operation. People need to co-operate with each other so no one can live alone. Teamwork is very important for the children that they can benefit from each other. In addition, they will improve their skills in communication. Furthermore, children will gain confidence and will be useful for the society in the future. Working in group will help children to strength friends’ relationships between themselves. Last but not least, they can co-operate in solving homework and studying for exams.

On the other hand, competition also is important thing that can add some fun for the class. It will encourage children to compete each other that they want to get high grades so they will get good jobs in the future. If someone is competitive, he will become creative and good leader for a team because competitive person does not accept loss. For example, competition in sports like playing football is vey fantastic that make players like the game.

In conclusion, both competition and co-operation are important for children. It helps them to get good positions in the future. In my opinion, co-operation is good but also competition is need.

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